scenes 1 and 2 script idea

today we discussed plans about the script, the script we planned is that for several scenes we are to have a commentator for the trailer (we have not decided on who will be the commentator in the trailer) we decided to work on the part we were assigned to create in studio max, i was assigned to write the script for scenes 1 and 2, these scenes are meant to be short with the camera panning towards the planet, the title would show up after this scene. i typed the script for the two scenes and i have got them more and less done.